Welcome to The Spot Writers. The
June prompt is to update a legend or legendary character/beast: bring it into
the modern world, or add a twist that isn't consistent with the original
legend.
This week’s story comes
from Phil Yeats. Phil (using his Alan Kemister pen name) recently published his
first novel. A Body in the Sacristy, the first in the Barrettsport Mysteries series of soft-boiled police detective
stories set in an imaginary Nova Scotia coastal community is available on Amazon.
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Silkie Samaritan
by Phil Yeats
She’d stumbled along the familiar path from the manor house to the
distant shore. Storm clouds obscured the heavens, and the fog was exceptionally
thick. She lost her way several times and lurched blindly amongst boulders and
brambles before regaining the familiar path.
In the darkest predawn
hours, she reached the cobblestone beach. Unseen, the relentlessly pounding surf
beckoned from only a few yards away. She dropped her winter coat onto the
cobbles and stumbled toward the sea. When she saw the effervescence created by
waves breaking upon the shore, she unbuckled her shoes and kicked them off. As she
stood, she loosened the ribbon and let her nightdress fall to the ground.
She stood shivering in the frigid
winter night wearing only her chemise. She stepped forward onto the slippery
ice-cold cobbles at the water’s edge. A few more steps and the undertow would
claim her, ending her miserable existence forevermore.
A large wave washed ashore
covering her feet with frigid water. She noticed the intruder as she instinctively
stepped back. He disappeared as the fog swirled around trees at the edge of the
beach and reappeared several seconds later. Closer now, she could distinguish his
features.
He was young, not yet
twenty, and strikingly handsome. When he spoke, his voice seemed familiar. But she
was certain she’d never seen him before.
He stood just beyond reach,
drifting in and out of focus as the fog swirled about him. He was too far away to
restrain her, but his bright twinkling eyes held her in thrall.
“Please, reconsider,” he said.
“There must be a better solution.”
How could he assess her
choices? He couldn’t know how she stood at sixteen with the hopes and ambitions
of the fairest and most accomplished maiden in the parish. Or how the handsome young
John Dunsmuir had been smitten at the balls, hanging on her every word and
action, lavishing praise and dancing with her one dance after another?
Then her handsome doctor
disappeared, and six months later her father promised her in marriage to the only
son of the local squire. Her financial security would be assured, but the
squire’s son was nearer fifty than forty and ugly as sin with a miserable
disposition that matched his appearance.
On their wedding night, he beat
her when he failed to consummate their marriage. Eighteen months later, she
remained a virgin, but the regular beatings became harsher. Tonight, when she
stumbled from the house, one eye was swollen shut, blood dribbled from her lip,
and she cradled her arm beneath her breasts to minimize the pain.
How could this enigmatic
stranger offer her any option but the one she’d chosen?
He held out a neatly folded
stack of clothes. “Remove your chemise and don these.”
She inspected the clothes,
rougher cloth than she was accustomed to and drab colours, but they’d be warm.
As her will to end her life waned, she was feeling the cold. She grabbed the grey-brown
trousers and pulled them over her legs and up under her chemise. Strange to be
wearing a sailor’s trousers, but they fit well.
“Next, the shirt. We must
leave all your clothes on the beach.” He twisted away holding out the clothes
while looking toward the path to the village.
She also turned away,
hoping to hide the bruises her husband had inflicted.
He turned back toward her
after she’d buttoned up the shirt. It was made of finer cloth, and like the
trousers, fit perfectly. Next, a pair of well-fitting shoes and then a
waistcoat. This was tight across her chest, but he insisted she fasten all the
buttons, flattening her breasts and aggravating the pain from her bruises. When
he passed her a boy’s cap and instructed her to tuck her blond curls up inside,
she realized what he had done. He’d disguised her as a lad, one on his way to
join a ship.
She followed, lacking the
will to do anything but follow his instructions, to a small house overlooking
the harbour.
“This is Mrs. Page. She
will keep you hidden and prepare you for the voyage. Please, follow her
instructions without question. I will return when it’s safe.” He turned and
departed without another word, leaving her in the care of the matronly Mrs.
Page.
He returned four days later
in the early morning light.
“Come,” he said picking up
the sailor’s kitbag Mrs. Page had packed. “We sail on the morning tide.
Two days later, they were
at a decent, but modest hotel in Paris, and in the months that followed visited
Vienna, Prague, Venice, Florence, Rome, and Naples. In the autumn, they
returned to Le Havre and boarded a brigantine destined for the New World.
During the months of their
grand tour of Europe, her saviour acted like a true gentleman, always attentive
to her needs and never acting inappropriately. Finally, on the voyage across
the Atlantic, he provided an explanation.
“I was always a strange
child. Many called me a changeling, but my half-brother, John, always stood up
for me, saved my life on several occasions. You know John, he courted you when
you were sixteen, but your father rejected him as a suitor, claiming he had
insufficient prospects. He departed determined to improve his prospects. When
you married, his dream didn’t die. He remained determined to somehow win you
back.”
“But how? My fate was
sealed once I married.”
“I chose to repay my debt
by watching for a chance to free you from your bonds.”
“And you’re taking me to
him?”
“I will leave you in
Halifax and you will travel by coach to Windsor where John is professor of
medicine at the newly established Kings College. He can now offer you the life
you deserve.”
“Won’t you come with me to
visit your brother and receive your reward for all you’ve done for me?”
He shook his head, a
wistful look in his eye. “In Halifax, my job will be done.”
The
late autumn storm, the worst in living memory, drove the mighty ship toward an
unforgiving lee shore. The splintering of massive timbers upon offshore rocks
assigned the ship and crew to watery graves.
He grabbed her by her arms, dove into the
waves and struck out for shore. With mighty undulating kicks, he battled the
turbulent seas and incessant undertow. His strength spent at the pounding surf
line, he thrust her into the outstretched arms of rescuers braving the undertow
from the shore. When they lifted her weight from his arms, he sighed, rolled
onto his side, and let the undercurrent drag him into the depths. The child of
a silkie from the sea, he’d grown to a man upon the land. Now, he would return
forevermore, a silkie in the briny deep.
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Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/
Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/
Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com
Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/
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