giovedì 27 marzo 2025

Paying the Price

 Welcome to The Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to write a story where the main character is a creative writing teacher. This week’s contribution was written by Phil Yeats. 

 

In April, 2024, Phil published The Body on Karli’s Beach, the third book in his Barrettsport Mysteries, a series of soft-boiled mysteries set in a fictional South Shore Nova Scotia town. For information about these books, and The Road to Environmental Armageddon, his trilogy about the hazards of ignoring human-induced climate change, visit his website: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

 

Paying the Price

by Phil Yeats

 

He trudged along the coast road to the north of town, bemoaning his fate. He’d spent two soul-sucking early evening hours teaching bored housewives and retirees the rudiments of creative writing. Hours he should have spent pouring forth pearls of creative wisdom on his next novel.

Who was he kidding? He’d produced no pearls since he published his first award-winning mystery romance during his final year as an undergraduate in a small university’s creative writing program. He’d self-published it using the pen name Annabelle Granger. An independent publisher respected in the realm of mystery novels snapped it up and moved it from the winner of a minor award with modest sales to the top of the bestseller list.

Two follow-up novels featuring the same characters weren’t as good. He knew it, his publisher knew it, reviewers knew it, and so did his readers. Sales tanked, and he soon found himself without a publisher. Or a steady income.

As he turned off the coastal road and down the dirt track to the dock where his rowboat awaited, he reviewed his rapid fall from fame and fortune. There was no mystery.

He wasn’t into mysteries, but during that final year at the university, a fellow student in the creative writing program encouraged him. Together, they turned his initial draft into a semi-literary novel that pleased both the readers of cozy mysteries and the stuffier literary critics. After they graduated, he didn’t put the required effort into the follow-ups because his mind was on what he hoped would be his next project—an adventure romance that asked a simple question. Why can’t society deal with the rapidly approaching climate change crisis?

He squandered the royalties from his only successful book on the small island he purchased and the house he built. No wonder he was now stretched for funds and reduced to teaching creative writing classes.

When he arrived at the shore, he saw her sitting on his dock, admiring the sunset. He recognized her immediately. Ashley Barnes, the muse who helped make his first book a roaring success.

He sat beside her and said nothing until the sun sank below the horizon.

“So what brought you to this obscure point in the western hemisphere?” he asked as the sunset’s yellows and oranges expanded to fill the western sky.

“Looking for my friend, Annabelle,” she said.

“Well, here I am.”

“Don’t think so. I’m looking at David Mitchell, not Annabelle Granger.”

As he rowed his skiff to his island home, he pondered the meaning of Ashley’s last comment. The answer seemed obvious. Annabelle was his creation, but Ashley contributed to her success. Did that mean she was looking for payback?

If it was money she was after, she was out of luck. He never had any.


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The Spot Writers:

 Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

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