Welcome to The Spot
Writers. This
month’s prompt is to write a story that involves a snow globe.
This week’s story comes from Cathy MacKenzie. Cathy’s
novel, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, is available from her locally or on Amazon.
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The
Snow Globe
by Cathy MacKenzie
For the fourth time that
day, Miranda stood in her bedroom. Her mother hadn’t disturbed the room except
to clean and move some of her books into Kevin’s room.
She spied her Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland book
and Ramona, the over-sized ratty rabbit she’d had since her third birthday, and
cradled the soft toy in her arms, inhaling scents of long ago. Stuffing escaped
from the seams where the stitching had loosened. One floppy ear hung lopsided
where her mother, eons ago, had reattached it, but the ear would never be the
same. No one could put Humpty Dumpty together again either, not to its original
form.
The stuffed animal’s forlorn amber eyes stared the way Kevin
stared at her, forcing her to look away. She heaved the stuffy to the bed and shrieked when she spied the snow globe on the shelf,
a gift from her father on his last Christmas. The name tag had
displayed both her parents’ names, but he had proudly exclaimed that he had
picked it out, so she had always considered the gift from him alone.
She shook the globe. White flakes lifted from the bottom,
revealing the bitty brick walkway leading from the log cabin to the edge of the
glass. Mesmerized, she watched while the flakes settled and obscured the path.
Why did a cherished object bring forth such horrible reminders?
She sank to the bed, one hand clutching Ramona to her shoulder,
letting the threadbare fleece absorb her tears. Too many scenes
bombarded her: Paul, Kevin, her parents. What was real and what wasn’t?
How could one object that once held so many fond memories conjure such
horridness? And how could one small object be so perfect in its portrayal: a
non-descript cabin in the woods, an ordinary path leading to the cabin’s door. Pristine
snow.
The more she stared, the more the past surfaced. Memories she wanted to
forget were jammed in a plastic object, small enough she could hold it in her
hand. Small enough she could toss it across the room, watch water cascade down
the wall, and eye fake snowflakes falling to the carpet instead of to the
bottom of the globe. She could even crush the trees and the cabin beneath her
feet.
She wanted to scream. Wanted to shout to a God she didn't believe
existed.
She shook her head, bringing herself back to the present, and squinted
at the innate object in her hand. The scene should be a tranquil one—and it
would be to anyone but her—but it showcased where she'd spent six years of her
life. She almost hurled the globe as she had Ramona Rabbit minutes
previously, but she returned it to the shelf, sliding it behind a china doll.
No matter the horrid memories, she couldn't trash one of the few
treasures she had left of her father.
She
must pull herself together. Had it been purely by accident she'd managed to
escape the kidnapper's clutches? Her foggy mind wouldn't allow her back there,
at least not to that last evening. Perhaps God did exist, after all.
She
dried her tears, slipped off the bed, and knelt on the floor. "Thank you,
Heavenly Father. Thank you."
The foregoing is a passage (slightly revised) from a scene in the book, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK. Miranda is kidnapped
at sixteen, escapes after six years, and returns home. She and her mother must
learn to readjust while constantly looking over their shoulders, wondering if
and when the kidnapper will return. Twists and turns will keep the reader
turning the pages.
Read this book to discover, as Paul Harvey would say, “the rest of the
story.”
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The Spot Writers—Our Members:
Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/
Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/
Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com
Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/
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